Comment on Holidays are finally over~ Renascence 1-3 up by wulfmune

"the normal one" was based off a story i came up with when i was in high shcool. back then it had more of a "magical girl" kind of element...well i guess magical boy XD;;; since afsi was an alien who could transform into a weapon. it was very spontaneous. i think the overall plot and characters are not polished but there is no harm in a fun little romp now and the right? XD