Nada mal. Solo te aconsejaria trabajar un poco mas en los detalles. Por ejemplo, el ojo del ciclope se ve un tanto extraño con esa ceja. Tal vez deberias ponerla pareja, centrada por encima del ojo o removerla por completo. El trabajo de texturas es muy bueno, y me encanta el efecto de la boca. La sengre se ve, si no realista, bastante impatactance. Me gusta bastante este trabajo.
Wo! Bloody creepy Creating monster is so much fun! This beast really looks sadistic and evil. All around very good work, except maybe the eyebrow where you can see it belongs to the left eye. You could make it round or something maybe? Or just erase it. Just my Anyway, a very cool grungy image.
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La verdad es que el tema de la ceja me preocupaba, y trabajé en él. Hice tres versiones del ojo: una como tú sugieres --centrada sobre él--, otra sin la ceja, y con la que al final me he quedado.
La elección se ha basado simplemente en una cuestión de expresividad. La ceja oblícua daba a la expresión del rostro más agresividad --aún. Sé que queda "antinatural", pero al final pensé que era la decisión más acertada para no romper la fuerza del gesto.
The eyebrow. That's what I was explaining to above
I made three different versions of the eye: first one with it round, second one without the eyebrow, and third, the final version.
The choice was finally a question of expressivity. The original eyebrow, oblicuos, makes the face --even-- more agressive. I know it looks "antinatural", but I just thought it was the best decission not to break the strength of the gesture.
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La verdad es que el tema de la ceja me preocupaba, y trabajé en él. Hice tres versiones del ojo: una como tú sugieres --centrada sobre él--, otra sin la ceja, y con la que al final me he quedado.
La elección se ha basado simplemente en una cuestión de expresividad. La ceja oblícua daba a la expresión del rostro más agresividad --aún. Sé que queda "antinatural", pero al final pensé que era la decisión más acertada para no romper la fuerza del gesto.
I made three different versions of the eye: first one with it round, second one without the eyebrow, and third, the final version.
The choice was finally a question of expressivity. The original eyebrow, oblicuos, makes the face --even-- more agressive. I know it looks "antinatural", but I just thought it was the best decission not to break the strength of the gesture.
(Sorry for my english mistakes
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