Comment on The Sea Hurts Because of You by AzurEmerald
I really like this piece, first of all 
The style is very unique and personal, especially in the way the narrator refers to events only she would know about. There's a lot of emotion. However, it's still easy to understand and isn't confusing.
I enjoyed the way you use ellipses and dashes because it makes the writing sound more natural. I feel like the narrator is actually speaking this story to me, which makes for a wonderful connection.
Yes, it is moving! It is very moving.
The style is very unique and personal, especially in the way the narrator refers to events only she would know about. There's a lot of emotion. However, it's still easy to understand and isn't confusing.
I enjoyed the way you use ellipses and dashes because it makes the writing sound more natural. I feel like the narrator is actually speaking this story to me, which makes for a wonderful connection.
Yes, it is moving! It is very moving.