Comment on The Mohearts by Moheart7
Yeah it gonna be one of those adventure series
Hewylewis done it
Bennythebeast has done it
So I thought I would give it a go
You might have seen the first couple of chapters in my gallery
Hewylewis done it
Bennythebeast has done it
So I thought I would give it a go
You might have seen the first couple of chapters in my gallery
Really?
Yeah
It's called the Moheart Chronicles
Starting off small of course
It's called the Moheart Chronicles
Starting off small of course
I'm making two connected adventures series myself. Maybe you, 
, or 
can give me some advice. I can't seem to get them off the ground.
, or can give me some advice. I can't seem to get them off the ground.Sounds interesting
What did you have in mind?
What did you have in mind?
I have one episode for the "Punch Time Exploders" Prologue complete and am currently working on the second...
And I'm still working on the prologue episode for "Adventures of the NIX", which will branch off Scroopfan's "Spongebob and Friends Adventures", as well the first episode, which I think needs improving.
And I'm still working on the prologue episode for "Adventures of the NIX", which will branch off Scroopfan's "Spongebob and Friends Adventures", as well the first episode, which I think needs improving.
Scroopfan? Blimey I haven't seen those videos in ages
Anyway
Since your writing a prologue I do have some advice
1. Make sure to start off small and further develop characters and plot as the story progresses
2.introduce characters with only a few important details and only describe more as the story continues
3. Don't introduce too many things at once, make sure to spread it out a little bit
I hope this helps
Anyway
Since your writing a prologue I do have some advice
1. Make sure to start off small and further develop characters and plot as the story progresses
2.introduce characters with only a few important details and only describe more as the story continues
3. Don't introduce too many things at once, make sure to spread it out a little bit
I hope this helps
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