Well, Chen's stuff is good, but there always seems to be this dark tinge to it. I think you should uplouad some more of stuff; it makes a nice contrast from Chen's work.
I do agree, and to be honest, I try and stray as far from the negative and darker sides of things. The world is full of that kind of thing as it is, without needing to add to it.
With that said, you and several others have requested I continue uploading my poems. So, I believe I will continue. With experience, hopefully I'll be able to in time produce works as good as others here on DA.
I'll still continue with my comics though. I love comedy, and making it.
-Lourwind.
With that said, you and several others have requested I continue uploading my poems. So, I believe I will continue. With experience, hopefully I'll be able to in time produce works as good as others here on DA.
I'll still continue with my comics though. I love comedy, and making it.
-Lourwind.
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
Do you have any tips on how I can improve?
-Lourwind.
-Lourwind.
Don't be afraid to not have it rhyme. Follow your instncts and have an approximate theme in mind. That really helps.