BottomlessPitStudios's avatar
Thanks, it honestly means a lot. I've very little experience with poems, but I tried to release what I felt, was how my heart felt at the time, as suggested by a close friend. This was the end result.

I hope to try again later today, I've had a few requests to continue and I plan to do so. ^_^
-Lourwind.
KelaLewis-Morin's avatar
ahhh nah its really good :) i like it keep writing mate
and please feel free to check out some of my work if you like :)