i like it short too it just sounded like you have more to say. but this was deep from just alone again great job and welcome 
There is more to say, just no good way to work it in you know?
yeah i get that feeling too
It'll probably come out in a different poem, I'm known to connect one to another, but it will have a different rhythm more than likely.
i be looking forward to reading it
Just keep your eye out! ^_^
sure will