Comment on Betrayal Prologue part 1 by metalchic79
MORE! please lol
This is similar to an idea I had for my fan fic 
got to figure out how to incorporate it though 
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got to figure out how to incorporate it though [link]After writing the passion story it wouldn't be to bad fitting in the original fan fic at the end or something. I get so scattered with my writing sometimes. I just write what I feel and it is random 
its ok