Comment on 18 Tornados by spoems

Apr 7, 2012

thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the first part. Perhaps it could have survived on it's own, but the second and third strophes are what I really wanted the poem to be about. Otherwise, there's no analysis or interpretation of the events and it becomes pure observational verse.

SilverInkblot

Apr 7, 2012

Fair enough - I often like simple observational poetry myself, and letting the reader draw their own conclusion from the image. _{And I may have done a presentation in my Modernism class on Imagism for this reason}

spoems

Apr 7, 2012

cheers for giving the reader breathing room!

_{alas, i am uneducated.}