Comment on :Forbidden- Ch 1: by Demyboilover

First I'd like to mention that its incredibly rare for me to stop and actually be interested in any yaoi story that someone writes mainly because I feel they all sound the same... But this one is different and gives it a different turn I applaud you! I love it! Its original! Its actually good! compared to most of the other things I've read, this one is one of the only ones that actually has a beautiful existing flow to it! And I just can not seem to stop going over it! I encourage you to continue this overwhelmingly addictive piece of writing!