Comment on Oppression by MisterMech

MLPMinis's avatar
I've only read the first chapter of this story but it's really well written. I commend the writer for good sentence structure and capturing the mindset of the slave in a realistic manner. Poor Murky :( How could anyone be so mean to such a cute little pony :C
MisterMech's avatar
I recommend giving the rest of the chapters a look. Poor thing goes through so much more, but it's captivating just the same.