Comment on Deryn's Nightmare part 1 by Shiyan-Kemosabi
1. Love it.
2. Watch your spelling. I only noticed these two.
-shacking = shaking
-genital = gentle
2. Watch your spelling. I only noticed these two.
-shacking = shaking
-genital = gentle
Those both made me grin a bit. I AM HORRIBLE.
But seriously, Shiyan dear, this is amazing, and I've only read the first chapter. :33 Do keep it up!!
(And a beta would be nice. We generally are.)
But seriously, Shiyan dear, this is amazing, and I've only read the first chapter. :33 Do keep it up!!
(And a beta would be nice. We generally are.)
I grinned too, don't worry. I only "grammar nazi'd" in Shiyan's word the first two posts or so since I'm lazy. I was actually surprised when he started writing a story, I'm so stoked. Out of all the years I've known him... (Sheesh years, I feel old now though I'm younger than him) this is epic. 
:33
Yeah, it *is* pretty epic. (SPOILER OF DOOM ALERT: Ending was kinda *blah*, though. Still love this fic.)
Yeah, it *is* pretty epic. (SPOILER OF DOOM ALERT: Ending was kinda *blah*, though. Still love this fic.)
That's nice to know xD
:33 Glad ya think so~