Comment on Deryn's Nightmare part 5 by Shiyan-Kemosabi
I had a strange feeling when typing it up, now I'm rereading it to see what I can change up to make it better for all to read. That is who would read it.
Awesome. So...I helped, right?
In more ways than one, I'll let you know when I have up dated the page for you to read it.
Cool. I'll glady read it when you finish.
Alrighty. Also, should I write about something else? MOre Dalek stuff?
Dalek works. Or something involving Lilit. There really needs to be more stuff involving her.
Hmmm, true. I'll reread the book to get more of a sense on her personality and see what I can do.
Awesome.
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