Your voice is especially strong in this piece, and I even wonder if it wouldn't do very well as a slam piece. The sort of dark, swaying meter is wonderfully caught of guard by the sudden use of the tornado as a symbol in the last line....it's like setting silk on fire, if that makes any sense
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Remember the simplistic beauty in life, and revel in the spirit of all things around you.
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Remember the simplistic beauty in life, and revel in the spirit of all things around you.
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"You might, rabbit, you might."
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The lighter, visual side of pamelaski *druideye
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