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~pamelaski:iconpamelaski: Mar 28, 2006, 1:33:35 PM
Whoa nice, setting silk on fire.... I like it.

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~winged-cavalier:iconwinged-cavalier: Mar 28, 2006, 12:38:40 PM
Your voice is especially strong in this piece, and I even wonder if it wouldn't do very well as a slam piece. The sort of dark, swaying meter is wonderfully caught of guard by the sudden use of the tornado as a symbol in the last line....it's like setting silk on fire, if that makes any sense :)

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~pamelaski:iconpamelaski: Mar 28, 2006, 1:33:35 PM
Whoa nice, setting silk on fire.... I like it.

--
"You might, rabbit, you might."

~info-desk *poetic-forms

The lighter, visual side of pamelaski *druideye