Comment on Bloodied Garnet 5.13 by Reagan700
By that, I mean that he doesn't lose, ever. And also, I'm losing count how many times someone in your story beats someone by hitting them in the gut. 
Guts don't even work that way. The blow wouldn't hurt that much or at all. Being so big and muscled, the blow damage should be little to none. That's when relaxed! If they were prepared for it, the gut would be the worst place to hit!
Guts don't even work that way.
The blow wouldn't hurt that much or at all. Being so big and muscled, the blow damage should be little to none. That's when relaxed! If they were prepared for it, the gut would be the worst place to hit!
pff
It's true though. I've seen it in many of the pages. It's how they win every time.
If the story goes: new bad guys and heroes win same way every time wash rinse repeat, then it's gonna get boring really quick. Heck, he did get beat up pretty bad to a point that he shouldn't of been able to dodge the slam with no effort and then he wins same way. As much as I like to read them, it's getting a bit dull in that regard. There's no challenge. The heroes never lose and come back to win. They don't have that sense of development of getting stronger to overcome challenges. They just beat everything in their path.
If the story goes: new bad guys and heroes win same way every time wash rinse repeat, then it's gonna get boring really quick.
Heck, he did get beat up pretty bad to a point that he shouldn't of been able to dodge the slam with no effort and then he wins same way. As much as I like to read them, it's getting a bit dull in that regard. There's no challenge. The heroes never lose and come back to win. They don't have that sense of development of getting stronger to overcome challenges. They just beat everything in their path.hmhmhm im aware of that...anyway this is just the begining of the story
Well, the beginning should have some big hook. Not have the big challenge easily toppled.
yenta look tired and that is not enough for you!?
Well, he looked tired and then fine in the next few panels. Able to dish it out the exact same as if he wasn't tired.
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