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~pamelaski:iconpamelaski: Mar 28, 2006, 1:32:41 PM
Thanks so much for your meaningful comments. I really appreciate them especially with my state of mind right now.

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"You might, rabbit, you might."

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The lighter, visual side of pamelaski *druideye

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~winged-cavalier:iconwinged-cavalier: Mar 28, 2006, 12:42:50 PM
First of all, anyone who uses the word "magnanimous" without sacrificing their meter deserves an award. I like the use of a bucket of manure as something of intense value...very nice. There's a bit of whimsical feel to this one that I feel lends itself well to the circus metaphor, while at the same time the third stanza retains enough intensity (specifically with "wire of our destiny") that the poem doesn't seem trite.

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Remember the simplistic beauty in life, and revel in the spirit of all things around you.
~pamelaski:iconpamelaski: Mar 28, 2006, 1:32:41 PM
Thanks so much for your meaningful comments. I really appreciate them especially with my state of mind right now.

--
"You might, rabbit, you might."

~info-desk *poetic-forms

The lighter, visual side of pamelaski *druideye