I have to congrat you about the colors and the anatomy, I really love your work and the feeling it transmits, but I thought I should warn you about the line thickness... Hair face and hands are good, but places like the hips and the shoulders (chin also, maybe...) should have a little extra thickness. I usually do this where the lines curves or at places that will be needing heavy shading, a little triangle thingy where the lines touch each other... I guess you've done this on another deviation of yours [link] and it's alright to abuse on this technique.

Just saying because your art is too good to have such a dull lineart. I guess you'd be realizing this sooner or later, but yeah xD

Keep the good work and good luck for your manga project