Yeah, it's my first. I might try more later - I kinda like the form
thank you for inspiring me to try it! I'm really glad that my original sentiments translated so well in such a brief work - it's always so cool to see how people interpret my stuff
. I personally thought of it as a more sad story, during creation, but I like how you've interpreted it. Defiance is good, and most gods have well-deserved reputations for holding their own.