Comment on .:[REQUEST] KyoyaXReader:. A Masquerade by oO0RyuuHeartsYou0Oo

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AndromedaKarpusi
It's a very cute story. My suggestions for the future are to not mix japanese words in with english (i.e "baka" instead of "idiot") and to use commas more often, to avoid run-on sentences. Otherwise the plot was very cute and overall it's a great story.