Comment on SFS: Lineage (Chapter Seven) by SaintWalker1806
Great chapter man! Action was really good and detailed and I like that a lot. I cannot wait to read more. 
Thanks dude! Was fairly difficult to get the tempo for the fight just right.
Glad you like the story so far
Be sure to check the Mainframe after every chapter for a more in-depth look at the Tartarus and other parts of the galaxy [link]
(and if you can figure out who's hacking in or who the leader's identity is....you can get written into Lineage
)
Glad you like the story so far
Be sure to check the Mainframe after every chapter for a more in-depth look at the Tartarus and other parts of the galaxy [link]
(and if you can figure out who's hacking in or who the leader's identity is....you can get written into Lineage
)You are welcome man!
Alright will do thank you for letting me know.
Taking a guess can't hurt so I think it is The Illusive Man just because of this line "That's unfortunate. But he was expendable. As are you….never forget that." That just really sounds like something he would say.
Alright will do thank you for letting me know.
Taking a guess can't hurt so I think it is The Illusive Man just because of this line "That's unfortunate. But he was expendable. As are you….never forget that." That just really sounds like something he would say.
Good guess.....but sadly....nope
Darn! Well that's usually how things go for me. 
Just keep at it....each new chapter will bring more information to help answer the question
Also remember, if you wait too long, the higher the odds that someone else may get it before you
Also remember, if you wait too long, the higher the odds that someone else may get it before you
I'll try, I only have time off today but I'm usually really busy. 
I'll keep trying when I can man.
I'll keep trying when I can man.It's all good. Let it roll around in your head when you can
Once you get it, I think you'll be quite surprised.
Once you get it, I think you'll be quite surprised.
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