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Have you read the newest one?
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OFC I DID!!! And I allready fav it!
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Thanks
it means a lot :)
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It's really nothing, Manny. you know I like your work, so It my pleasure! :tighthug:
IINegativeII's avatar
yeah
but i like it >_>
so..i will thank u :3
thoughts on the new poem?
honestly
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I love the second part of the poem:
    But I hope at least ..that she'll forget
    That she'll move on..have no regret.
    No reason to be upset...or know that I..haven't let go yet
    That she completely forgets the day we met
    And hope this time around she plays a better role..than that of my Juliet


I think it's the most honest part in the whole poem.
The emotions are strong and firm, they are not week and unsure.
I like it A LOT :)
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Thanks :)
yeah...
I tried my best :)
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And you did very well!
But tell me, what do you think about it?
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