randyneal's avatar
The story is written very well...good description of people and the actions that take place. I continue to love the story. Good touch with the shopping trip.
WhiteLionXIII's avatar
Thanks, I was looking for a way for Karin to get some information out of Hinata and that when the idea hit me to combine getting the info and doing the shopping. Plus this way Naruto didn't have to deal with all those rude and hateful shop owners.