Thanks Paula. Yes, my watchers are brilliant at giving feedback. I like how they will speak the brutal truth and say Oberon looks like a girl at the moment, or the perspective is wrong, etc. As artists, we don't always see what others see as we're too close to the work and it can take a while to realise something is not right. Gordon, AKA ~
dashinvaine has been a brilliant mate as far as critiquing my WIPs over the years, and I often do the same for him.
I used to be more in the habit of posting work in progress, it seems to make much more sense to get feedback before the drawing is finished, rather than when it's done and probably too late to change anything. Deviantart admin get uppity every now and then about moving WIPs from our galleries to scraps, which I've protested about in the past. There's little point in posting them to scraps at the start as I wouldn't get the desired feedback sought.
Unfortunately, I had fixed the black areas, so I haven't been able to totally remove them, but I should be able to rework those areas (thank goodness for bristol board or I'd have holes in my drawing!) Thanks for the blue tac tip, I'll remember that in future