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Comment on Box of Bees by ~xiooua [parent]

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:icontelescopica:
I like it too, especially the surprise awesome rhyming deal with "tank of gas." Yay!
:iconxiooua:
Thank you Ms. Jayne! :heart:
:iconpurplepoet:
I agree with telescopica, the surprise rhyming was cleverly done :)

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I cannot see or feel,
But I know.
:iconbananaprincess:
I generally like my poetry less abstract, but I love your work with sound. Alliteration, consonance, assonance--you use them so well that I have to read this aloud to myself. Sounds and images are your strengths.
I know I just fav'd a piece of yours, but I have to fav this as well.

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Critiquing someone's prose or poetry is an awesome thing to do.
:star:The supremely awesome Mimesis 3 is available now!
:iconxiooua:
Less abstract? You won't see that from me very often. =P

I'm glad you liked it! Tell me this one isn't as vague as my others, did you understand it? I tried my best not to be vague.
:iconzalize:
I agree with bananaprincess, your images and sounds and the feeling of being in there you get in this poem is superb.

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listen out for the whisper, the whisper on the wind . . .

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