Comment on Teen Love- a midnight poem by ~rebelicious [parent]

~rebelicious Apr 15, 2006, 7:33:27 PM

alright.. i'l give you the short version

girl is happy
girl meets cute boy
girl= very happy
cute boy ditches her for her best friend
girl=depressed=suicide
other boy comes in that she doesn't know about...
read the rest of the poem from here

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ø¤º°`°º¤ø
,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,
°º¤ø,¸₪ ®℮b℮l أ© أous ♥
₪¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°
°`°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°` °`°
°º¤ø,¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°
,¸,¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°

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~Palulop Apr 13, 2006, 11:02:59 PM

wait a sec... where did the girl go? explain that and this is a fav... dark but very very well done...

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~diabol Apr 14, 2006, 8:27:33 AM

gasp

nice

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~serafina05 Apr 14, 2006, 10:58:58 AM

its really good... its almost confusing in a way. its very sad though, what made you write it?

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~Fibz Apr 14, 2006, 11:51:59 AM

Sounds like a poetic script for some sort of teen sitcom.
Its cool I guess.

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Boo!

~MeggieBaby Apr 14, 2006, 11:59:10 AM

wow freekin amazing
i love your righting just as much as i love your picturs

Bravo
Bravo
Meggie out

~criimson Apr 14, 2006, 12:10:19 PM

its sooo good.
its so deep haha ...which means i dont really understand it all
but its very very amazing

~chelsea-chic Apr 15, 2006, 3:29:13 AM

its great! dark and but i love the way it tells a story like that. what made you write it?

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~rebelicious Apr 15, 2006, 7:33:27 PM

alright.. i'l give you the short version

~rebelicious Apr 15, 2006, 7:33:43 PM

thank you!

--
ø¤º°`°º¤ø
,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,
°º¤ø,¸₪ ®℮b℮l أ© أous ♥
₪¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°
°`°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°` °`°
°º¤ø,¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°
,¸,¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°

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