the colours you used neither clash or go well together. and there's wayyy too many colours, to the point it takes away the focal point from an image. there's no visual path to be found, and the eye finds it boring and tiring to look at.
I'm sorry my friend but your eyes are terrible.. my eyes find this to be an amazing piece focusing first on the eyes and traveling down to bloodstream to the right side (her left) of the mouth then continues following the lips to the slight tent of red in the hair.. afterwords traveling back up the curvature of the black hair and falling back at the eyes... although her left eye (the blue one) does seem to push attention away, it is quickly drawn back by the red blood contrasting against the whiteness of the face.. your statement is invalid
Sorry.. I just looked at your entire photography gallery... "heat" and "divine light" are the only 2 of your photos that do not lead my eyes straight put of the picture or just simply look terrible...
I love how you say how everything is wrong with her photo and think that your better than everyone else.. I think there's a word for that.. and I believe its "conceded"