Another fine chapter! ^_^
(Even if you don't like it yourself.
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(Even if you don't like it yourself.
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Well, it's... decent.
It's more that I don't like Cloudcover. I really failed in making him into a well characterized element of the original story.
It's more that I don't like Cloudcover. I really failed in making him into a well characterized element of the original story.
True, he didn't exactly get a lot of pagetime (wordtime? I dunno) in the original story like the other characters, but I think he works fine. ^_^