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Well I feel like I should wait a bit, let you sweat it out, but the only thing I could complain about, is that it seems a bit odd, the phrase "I don't even question them anymore." I think"I don't even question 'it' anymore." fits better or I guess you could just take the sentence before it and rephrase it so it doesn't include an infinitive, but instead has a plural subject. But that's just nitpicking.