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3wyl
ffrankies
Nov 12, 2013
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I'd like some feedback on the dialogue and plot of the story - was it interesting and realistic enough? What could I have done to make it more so? Is there anything in particular that I did well or poorly?
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3wyl
Nov 15, 2013
Added, thanks!
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ffrankies
Nov 15, 2013
Thank you
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