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Comment on Faerie in the Spider's Web by ~Sweets-B [parent]

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~Sweets-B May 4, 2006, 9:10:01 AM
I thought about naming her but didn't since she is your character. I'm not good with coming up with names anyway X}

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Sweets :jackdirt:
"When is being Fluffy ever a bad thing?"

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*faile35 May 3, 2006, 12:18:13 PM
Well, I've already "noted" to you what I think of it (it's well written, among other things). One thing: I find myself wishing that this poor, unfortunate heroine had a name. That's a matter of taste, of course, but I think your story would feel more tragic and less "documentaried" if she had a name. I'm personally not sure fairies have names, but there you go. I'll link to this on the images. Your descriptions are flattering. I'm honored to be part of the first writing you're posting here. =) --Faile35
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~Sweets-B May 4, 2006, 9:10:01 AM
I thought about naming her but didn't since she is your character. I'm not good with coming up with names anyway X}

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Sweets :jackdirt:
"When is being Fluffy ever a bad thing?"
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*faile35 May 4, 2006, 12:10:33 PM
No problem. If you do think of a name for her, feel free to throw it in there. Maybe someone else will. "Gelica" and "Tinkerbell" are off limits, though. =) --Faile35
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~Sweets-B May 5, 2006, 9:31:37 AM
How bout Gwynd? That sounds faerieish.

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Sweets :jackdirt:
"When is being Fluffy ever a bad thing?"
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*faile35 May 5, 2006, 11:44:17 AM
Gwynd? It has definite potential. Let me chew on it for a while... =) --Faile35
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~Kaytara Jul 7, 2006, 11:59:19 AM
Dramatic.... O_O

I really like it. A bit unrealistic, since spiders (at least the ones I see at home) usually react instantly and leap to attack when sensing vibration on the web, instead of 'marching steadily', but that doesn't matter. It's still a good read. :D :thumbsup:

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"And once again, Probability proves itself willing to sneak into a back alley and service Drama as would a copper-piece harlot." ~Vaarsuvius, Order of the Stick
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~rogueglitter Apr 22, 2008, 8:11:25 AM
Dude, loved it! I liked how the spider was cautious, like it had experience with fairies on it's web before, plus it was excellent for dramatic effect.
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~Sweets-B Apr 23, 2008, 6:56:08 PM
thanks

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Sweets :jackdirt:
"When is being Fluffy ever a bad thing?"
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Mood: Joy ~AmberDutchess Apr 24, 2008, 9:39:51 AM
Oooh. I so enjoyed reading that. You should write more! Very good!
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