Comment on Alphonce Looking At Himself by 2DXMurdocfan
Jacob: Kim calm down. It's Not your fault it's Mine. This wouldn't have happened if I hadn't Knocked over your Grandmothers antic.
((Hey are you trying to spell antique?))
Kim: Who cares about that stupid thing?! I hurt you! Murdoc's mad at me! My marriage is over!
Kim: Who cares about that stupid thing?! I hurt you! Murdoc's mad at me! My marriage is over!
((Yeah. I don't know how to spell words like that very well.))
Jacob: Not if I have anything to say about it.
Jacob went out and saw Alphonce and Murdoc still Arguing.
Jacob: Murdoc! Stop It! That's Enough!
Murdoc looked and saw Jacob glaring at him with his arms crossed.
Jacob: Not if I have anything to say about it.
Jacob went out and saw Alphonce and Murdoc still Arguing.
Jacob: Murdoc! Stop It! That's Enough!
Murdoc looked and saw Jacob glaring at him with his arms crossed.
((Oh, I would look up the word to see how it's spell.))
((Hey, what's with the reviews on my fanfiction?))
Murdoc: No way! She hurt you. You the first boy close to be my own son. It's her fault and I want this marriage to end right now!
((Hey, what's with the reviews on my fanfiction?))
Murdoc: No way! She hurt you. You the first boy close to be my own son. It's her fault and I want this marriage to end right now!
((Just to give you some support. Since You left a Review on my Newest One.))
Jacob sighed and Put his Sunglasses on and Took out his little Gadget that Looks like a Pen. He Flashed Murdoc with it and Murdoc was standing and Staring at him.
Murdoc: What happened? Why is Kim crying and why is the house a mess and why are you banged up?
Jacob: I Couple Guys tried to rob the place and I Managed to Call the Police and have them get Taken away. I got beaten up, But I Knocked them out before the police took them away. Kim was scared for me that's all.
Jacob sighed and Put his Sunglasses on and Took out his little Gadget that Looks like a Pen. He Flashed Murdoc with it and Murdoc was standing and Staring at him.
Murdoc: What happened? Why is Kim crying and why is the house a mess and why are you banged up?
Jacob: I Couple Guys tried to rob the place and I Managed to Call the Police and have them get Taken away. I got beaten up, But I Knocked them out before the police took them away. Kim was scared for me that's all.
((Well thanks, but I don't like getting charity. If my story suck let the readers comment. Like Kelly Clarkson song "Stronger", 'What doesn't kill me makes me stronger'.))
Murdoc: That doesn't sound like her to cry. Be upset maybe, but never crying. Now what really happen?
Murdoc: That doesn't sound like her to cry. Be upset maybe, but never crying. Now what really happen?
((Who's Kelly Clarkson? I Don't Think it sucks. Hope you Continue 'Alphonce's Big Brother'))
Alphonce: Dad He's telling the truth.
Alphonce: Dad He's telling the truth.
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