Comment on Alphonce Looking At Himself by 2DXMurdocfan
Past Hannibal: I'm talking front row in front of the hottest babe that was ever draw, now 3D and I mean 3D double D.
Murdoc shudders with lust then thought for a minute.
Past Murdoc: Wait, what is she's some guy dressed as in women clothes?
Past Hannibal: I checked and she's a she. I asked the owner that question just to sneak a peek on her to make sure and he said he did without a doubt hired a girl. I mean look at her! No way an transvestite can come close!
Murdoc smiled at the picture.
Past Murdoc: Alright.
He holds up the picture until a small laser hit, leaving a burn circle on the entire face.
Past Murdoc: Jacob!
Past Jacob: Sorry, dad!
((Are you mad or something?))
Past Kim: What is going on in here?
((No.))
Murdoc grinned seeing Kim's head on the picture.
Past Hannibal: Well, well, well. Murdoc, who is this?
((Do you know what ESP is?))
Jacob held Kim's hand.
Past Kim: What's your brother doing here?
((Yes, I don't want any explanation. Note: She never met Hannibal until just now.))
((Well, Pardon Me.))
RE Write:
Jacob Held Kim's Hand.
Past Kim: Murdoc, Who is that?
Hannibal stormed pass Murdoc to introduce himself.
Past Hannibal: I'm Hannibal Niccals. I'm Murdoc's brother, older brother but with his health hazards on drinking and smoking, people could think the other way.
Past Murdoc: *under his breath* Dick.
Past Hannibal: And who are you and why are you shacking up here with my baby brother? You two shagging each other or are you stuck here until Murdoc finally pays you?
Past Murdoc: That's enough!
Jacob Pinched his nose.
Past Jacob: Why do you smell like bad onions. You stink!
Hannibal growled.
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