Mind if I put my critique here in the comments? It's to small, to make a whole 100 character paragraph for it.
Why is Thunderp crying out of the top of her left eye? Also, the cigarette isn't in her mouth. It's just kind of floating there.
Why is Thunderp crying out of the top of her left eye? Also, the cigarette isn't in her mouth. It's just kind of floating there.
that's not tears- it's makeup. i do agree with the part on the cigarette though. thanks for the critique!