Nichrysalis's avatar
Yes. The line virginity is a childhood disease was taken from the song "551." I had several reworded versions and other inspired lines similar to it, but none of them came close to that line, which I'm still not sure expresses what I need to express for this poem. I normally don't take lyrics outright, but I do want to revisit this piece, as it hasn't quite sat well with me with using that lyric. Suggestions would be extremely appreciated. =)
MattVoscinar's avatar
Haha, I thought so, That line jumped right out at me. I'll revisit this later this evening and give more detailed feedback on it.
Nichrysalis's avatar
I just wanted to let you know that your contributions have helped me come to terms with this poem and myself. I believe the writing is that much stronger for it.
MattVoscinar's avatar
You are the shit. Don't ever forget that.
Nichrysalis's avatar