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Comment on Ayumi by ~-emp-

~Clazziquai:iconClazziquai: May 14, 2006, 8:52:39 PM
wow. that's pretty! <3

she's cuute~ good job :D

ummm... name her... Reya?

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~Clazziquai:iconClazziquai: May 14, 2006, 8:52:39 PM
wow. that's pretty! <3

she's cuute~ good job :D

ummm... name her... Reya?

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~Chibi-Sammeh:iconChibi-Sammeh: May 14, 2006, 8:52:59 PM
She is so cute! I guess for crits....I think the hair needs to be more free falling, it seems very forced,(or something along the line of that)

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~JeniOctavia:iconJeniOctavia: May 14, 2006, 8:54:02 PM
Awwww!
She's very adorable. Hm. I would name her...
Dala. She reminds me of a character named Shandala from a flash animation called Broken Saints. ^_^;

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~Mau506SK:iconMau506SK: May 14, 2006, 9:07:30 PM
So cute ^^

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~ghostmonstir:iconghostmonstir: May 14, 2006, 9:09:42 PM
this ones really cute and light :D......maybe if you made the outlines more consistent it would help like some of them are really dark and some are lighter.....Maybe this was intentional I dont know its good though :D
*devouredex:icondevouredex: May 14, 2006, 10:32:39 PM
cool use of colour, love the line work, great piece.

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~killbear:iconkillbear: May 15, 2006, 2:38:00 AM
Nice.
The bow on her shirt looks like it's pasted flat on the picture, though.
Next step would be shading and maybe a background. :)

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~luvtodraw:iconluvtodraw: May 15, 2006, 5:11:38 AM
She's so kawaii! You did a GREAT job on this! But I think you could have done more to the hair or something... Oh well! It's still great!!!! :clap:

Hmm... As for a name? Eh... I'm better with horse names, but......... Umm.... Angel? Zora? Something?
*ObsidianBlk:iconObsidianBlk: May 15, 2006, 12:13:06 PM
The drawing is very well done and the base coloring looks very good. You might want to add some shadows and highlights to the picture to give it some more depth, but otherwise, it's excellent!

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