Comment on Oct #88 - Wrong Potion Winners! by KovoWolf
Don't worry some of these contests are judged by people with their own views and not open to other people's perspectives, I have achieved the most views and comments in several other contests I have had the time to monitor and I have lost. The irony is that I lost to a pokemon rip off in one of my favorite OC's last month, and in this one I used Pikachu and lost to a pokemon too.
Not to sound concited or anything, but I thought my lit piece was better than the others...None of the lit pieces actually placed but one of them did get an honorable mention.
I mean, the others were good too but they didn't seem to have very good character development and were way to short and moved too fast. I only had 24 hours to write mine and I poured a lot of thought and heart into it.
Maybe you would like to check it out?
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I mean, the others were good too but they didn't seem to have very good character development and were way to short and moved too fast. I only had 24 hours to write mine and I poured a lot of thought and heart into it.
Maybe you would like to check it out?
[link]Congratulations!! I just wanted to see some other different concepts, poemon and digimon seem to influence creativity all around, I even made mine to look like Pikachu to attract some attention, it was originally a beige kitty, but I changed the colors at the end. What do you think?
You might want to sitch the "He" to the name of the character and check this throughout the short story. I run into these things when I write also.
You might want to sitch the "He" to the name of the character and check this throughout the short story. I run into these things when I write also.
Yeah, I know what you mean. I need to level a bit better with possible readers. This is really the first time that I've put up one of my stories for all to see. Of course I know who "He" is but who is to say that they do.
Right, good luck in future endeavours!