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there's a getaway map on the underside
of your pillow,
I think they were my favourite lines.
It's a beautiful piece, and I really like the imagery you use throughout. I agree with *SomethingOnceSacred that there's something vaguely fairy tale-ish about it, and I like that aspect of it a lot. 
It actually made me think of The Goose Girl; I like that fairy tale a lot. 
Lovely work, keep writing!
of your pillow,
I think they were my favourite lines.
It's a beautiful piece, and I really like the imagery you use throughout. I agree with *SomethingOnceSacred that there's something vaguely fairy tale-ish about it, and I like that aspect of it a lot. It actually made me think of The Goose Girl; I like that fairy tale a lot. Lovely work, keep writing!
Thank you! I used to keep things under my pillow, when I was little, because I thought they would mean something. I believed in the magic of dreams and I thought that might somehow make my wishes and hopes come true.
I will have to go look up The Goose Girl now, thank you very much!
I will have to go look up The Goose Girl now, thank you very much!
You're welcome!