Hmmm. I don't know. I think I preferred it the other way. Maybe it's because I liked the last line.
Actually! Oh! I think if you swapped the last two paragraphs around (or whatever they are called) it would work well. But that's just me. I think it works with the last line feeling gentle and sweet, rather than bold and triumphant. Like finally she can feel peaceful. Like, all this torment and fighting, then, yeah! Go away devil!... Now gently, gently stepping forward.
Sorry if I suck at explaining it. Haha!