Lacriyme's avatar
I don't think it's too much of a mess, but sometimes that makes things all the more intriguing. I really like this, and definitely can identify. I'm sure a lot of people can, especially when it comes to writing, where it's so hard to make yourself believe that anything you create is good. If I might share what a friend of mine's told me, since you said this is a reflection of your own thoughts- write for yourself, first. Gaining confidence in your own writing is hard, and I understand that. But the less you worry about what people might think, and subsequently whether or not things are good... That helps.
Sorry, I kind of just went philosophical on you ^^" Anyways, I do really like this, and I hope you keep writing, because even if you don't think it, I think you have talent~