Comment on Chapter 9: Secret Foe by Reiyaa
Poor Kokoro, I can understand why she feels indebted to her master. He rescued her from a life of forced breeding 
Her backstory is so tragic! She's a trooper though ; u ; Is there a reason why her master let Iris think she was the only one?
For some reason I like the fact that Kokoro has more power than even Haru
Ren is cruel to have her betray Butter :I And being so sneaky with that bow.
There's one crit I'd like to add. I think this would work better if Kokoro's backstory was hinted at in chapters, until it comes to a boiling point in one chapter, if that made any sense.
Short chapter, but still very full of emotion and exciting developments. Flame points is building up to even greater developments
Her backstory is so tragic! She's a trooper though ; u ; Is there a reason why her master let Iris think she was the only one?For some reason I like the fact that Kokoro has more power than even Haru
Ren is cruel to have her betray Butter :I And being so sneaky with that bow.There's one crit I'd like to add. I think this would work better if Kokoro's backstory was hinted at in chapters, until it comes to a boiling point in one chapter, if that made any sense.
Short chapter, but still very full of emotion and exciting developments. Flame points is building up to even greater developments