Comment on Vexed Affections by intricately-ordinary

... I read this poem twice... it flowed so well...

Your rhyming is very well written, honestly; the opening seemed rough in the first running, but then got better as one read on.... and that's what happened once the rhyming started...

it was good, honestly speaking... the sense of being just one person who is shallow to comprehend what she was going through... and didn't do much about it...

Its a harsh feeling... well portrayed...