Glad you like it.
And it's good to see (and get!) a Critmas critique.
I really need to catch up on mine.
I'm pleased to hear you think the voice works well: I think that's usually one of the weaker elements of my writing. I'll keep this in mind next time I write something with this sort of protagonist: if I've stumbled across something that works here, it would definitely be good to use it again.
I was also a little worried it would totally clash with PoTO, so that's a relief too.
I try to avoid bold/italics for emphasis in fiction, but for those phrases I think you've got a point. It would help them stand out, and looking back, I'm not thrilled about the quotes myself. I've had a fiddle around and bold definitely stands out, but I'm wondering if it might be a little too much. Any thoughts?
In any case, thank you for the comment!