Comment on Tricking the Innocent by AidaLily
I swear English is like my second language and it's the only one I know. Maybe I should get a beta reader for my stories. It might work out better.
Thank you for the feedback and I am happy that I was able to make the characters work properly. I haven't even gotten to Morrigan yet, but I seen pieces of my hubby getting through a bit and he claims she reminds him of me. >.>
I am so happy you liked the dialogue they did have. It was slightly hard to keep my own thoughts out of it at times like when Zevran had the thought of smacking Alistair for being that innocent.
I must say I am a bit of a fan of Zevran now. Lol. I decided to make a male character as well just to see if they could hook up with the other. I kind of like the pairing now though I admit to entertaining the thought of Alistair and Morrigan getting drunk and somehow ending up married. The fights I can imagine between them are hilarious in my head.
I guess I am a Dragon Age Fangirl now.
You are very welcome. I wanted to make sure I could pull it off even though I wasn't able to get the game until much later in my research. I can't wait to play it more and see how the characters interact. I may even be inspired to write more Dragon Age fanfictions. I am just so happy you loved it and thanks for the critique.
Thank you for the feedback and I am happy that I was able to make the characters work properly. I haven't even gotten to Morrigan yet, but I seen pieces of my hubby getting through a bit and he claims she reminds him of me. >.>
I am so happy you liked the dialogue they did have. It was slightly hard to keep my own thoughts out of it at times like when Zevran had the thought of smacking Alistair for being that innocent.
I must say I am a bit of a fan of Zevran now. Lol. I decided to make a male character as well just to see if they could hook up with the other. I kind of like the pairing now though I admit to entertaining the thought of Alistair and Morrigan getting drunk and somehow ending up married. The fights I can imagine between them are hilarious in my head.
I guess I am a Dragon Age Fangirl now.
You are very welcome. I wanted to make sure I could pull it off even though I wasn't able to get the game until much later in my research. I can't wait to play it more and see how the characters interact. I may even be inspired to write more Dragon Age fanfictions. I am just so happy you loved it and thanks for the critique.
You are very welcome, my dear! And Zevran is actually a bi-sexual romance character. Your character can sleep with him whether they're a boy or girl. 
Alistair will always be my baby, though. He has a special place in my heart... & I hate the thought of him sleeping with Morrigan! I love her to death - but she shan't have Alistair!
... but Zevran can certainly have him for a night.
Alistair will always be my baby, though. He has a special place in my heart... & I hate the thought of him sleeping with Morrigan! I love her to death - but she shan't have Alistair!
... but Zevran can certainly have him for a night.
Lol. I did say they were drunk and never said sleep together. I said got drunk and married. Maybe you do like the idea. XD
So Zevran is a bisexual character? Awesome!
And yes, Zevran is more than welcomed to show Alistair the "cure" for drinking again.
So Zevran is a bisexual character? Awesome!
And yes, Zevran is more than welcomed to show Alistair the "cure" for drinking again.
... Alistair marries my Grey Warden. Morrigan can suck it and go get her some other Templar.
& Leliana is the female bisexual character. There are so many different story-lines - I promise you'll love it. I'm actually going to host a Share You Dragon Age OC contest some time this year. It's open to Fan-Fics!
& Leliana is the female bisexual character. There are so many different story-lines - I promise you'll love it. I'm actually going to host a Share You Dragon Age OC contest some time this year. It's open to Fan-Fics!
It sounds like fun. *smiles* I also love writing fanfics. I just started a new character named Lucio. He is most definitely going after Zevran. lol
... do it. 
Lol. Don't worry I will.