SO BEAUTIFUL ;w; I really like how sharp your works are asdhkj and the English is fine from what I can see, except for I would change the 'Have you thought about my reputation at all?' to 'Have you /not/ thought about my reputation at all?'
you don't have to change it, and I dont think that yours is wrong, just that adding the 'not' would let it read smoother in my opinion :')

aside from that, great job!