Comment on Pheonix Crew by DestinyBlue

Exceptional line art and line art style you got there. This really looks professional judging by how the contours are made and how most points in the line art are properly used to emphasize a particular anatomical feature. You are certainly a master in this. However, it seems to me that there are parts in the line art that lack the boldness (maybe because there is so much variation in the thickness in the lines) and that they maybe need some of that thickness. Almost everything in the lineart looks perfect (well you could have worked on the hands a bit more (especially the left hand of the 2nd topmost character and the right hand of the 3rd topmost character). The face of the 2nd topmost character seems to be squished by horizontal forces. In retrospect, excellent job.