omfg it's so cute XD i wanna know what happens ;o i really like your coloring XD i think it really helps to tie everything together and make it clear @w@ too cool~!

definetly comic category no question... Looks amazing, as I said before -- I have nasty word bubbles in my comic. but then again my characters use some nasty words. so I think it fits after all things are considered. but definetly pay attention to it. make it easy to read. the aim of comics is universal story telling through pictures and words. if your shits good, it doesnt matter how you word it --- I read scantillated manga with fan subs in it all the time and the combination of pics and words is absolutely haunting. I say again universal storytelling. picture this page with no words. everyone still should know whats going on. since we can all do that I think your on the right track. rock on!

-Kyle

thanks XDD yesh, i think the color helped alot too, i wish my lineart was good enough, but this is okay too XDD i was gonna try to get the whole page two drawn and inked today, but the whole finding a day randomly really messed me up XDD sooo, i ended up playing the new harvest moon most of the day >_< and running out for some stuff >_> but newho, thanks! XD

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Make a man a fire and he'll be warm for a day, set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.

thanks XD that's a pretty good point and something to definitely think about X3

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Make a man a fire and he'll be warm for a day, set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.

wow. that's some really nice coloring.

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“I learned so much the first time I baby-sat. I couldn’t just warm up any old formula. She was lack toast and tolerant.”

"The plates have been licked. Dessert is imminent."

"The hammer of Justice is unisex."

thanks X3

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Make a man a fire and he'll be warm for a day, set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.

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“I learned so much the first time I baby-sat. I couldn’t just warm up any old formula. She was lack toast and tolerant.”

"The plates have been licked. Dessert is imminent."

"The hammer of Justice is unisex."