Comment on Zatanna by ~Eliana-Prog

Y la hiciste con excelentes atributos!!! (.)(.)

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Una mujer hermosa es la gloria de los ojos, el infierno del alma y el purgatorio del bolsillo

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tocaba aprovechar el escote...

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So much music, so little time to hear it all...

Si, escote, lero, lero, escote!!!

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Una mujer hermosa es la gloria de los ojos, el infierno del alma y el purgatorio del bolsillo

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Y full equipo con dobles airbags.

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hey nice work again, hehe I never get tired of say it , I only note something weird on her left side of her face, not sure if its the hair that it's cutting the face... and also the transition between the neck and the face needs a little bit of smoothness, and yeah, she has the whole package OMG

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Vicent Van Vortex
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Thank you, I think I fixed it, you were completely right, I blurried a little bit the lineart layer to smooth the transition between neck and face, and I added some shadows to the left side of her face, I think it worked, gimme your opinion once again please

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So much music, so little time to hear it all...

una pal piloto y otra pal copiloto

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So much music, so little time to hear it all...

Hi!, that corrections changes everything, good work! I'm still not sure about the neck/head transition, the change that you made is good, but it has a little sense as if the neck were more in the back than the head, I think it's beacause the contours of the chin are so well defined that makes it look apart from the rest of the body, check out this example [link] the angle is different, but you can see that there is some sense of a "border" between the neck and the head, but still there are just one, excuse me if I'm saying something wrong

by the way, I really love how in this one the eyes look sooooooooooo catchy and here mouth expression is subtle but beautiful, congratulations

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Vicent Van Vortex
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Y donde se esta presentando la zatannita para ir a ver sus funciones de magia, con esta maga yo ya me vuelvo fanatico de la magia, Gustavo Lorgia y Fabriani que charrera!!!! denme a Zatanna todos los dias en citytv con su magia diaria, ya mi perrito esta babeando demasiado.

AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PATATIN PATAN!!!! ESTE LOBO SE INFARTO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


ELIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO ES JUSTO, TEN CONSIDERACION CON ESTE TETOLATRAILUSTRADOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YA TE DIJE MAESTRAZA???????

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