Comment on MDE round 1 by SaintLavellan

Oh wow thank you :3 <3 this was the kind of CC I've been wanting! You are certainly welcome to redline if you'd like and link it to me, I am a visual learner so sometimes seeing what people mean helps me more than reading it although I do gather what you're saying without it, it may help ;D I actually just sent her in yesterday *so sad now* but I'll make sure to keep an eye out about what you said and make an even better second round ! After all CC helps improve always not just in one round of a pageant xD
Thanks again C: