TaviTurnip's avatar
Looks fine to me :P Although I do agree with others that he maaay be slightly not curvy enough. Just slightly.
SoulSpade's avatar
Ah ok, what do you think I can do to fix it, I'm all ears. Discord is kinda tough for me and I want to do a good job ^^;
TaviTurnip's avatar
Well let's see, taking a good look at this and at references... (in particular, this picture of him) His one arm and hand, as someone else pointed out, is very "human" at the moment. It doesn't resemble the thin claw or the thick paw he has on either forearm. Otherwise, his neck, it is kind of thick, although the actual technique on it is really good, so it would be a shame to undo that now ^^; I think it might be survivable like that, so it's your call.

I will say that his face is completely wonderful in every which way. I would not change that for any reasons at all. Its curves and the expression are perfect, really~
SoulSpade's avatar
Yes, nailed the face! :iconfreddierageposeplz:

XD But seriously, I'll just have to completely redraw his arm and start over. For his neck, probably the same thing, maybe an adjustment tool to bring the lines closer to one another, and thus giving him a thinner neck; not sure what to do as far as varying thickness goes, whether his neck should get thicker going towards the torso, or remain the same throughout...

Looks like I gotta bit of work ahead of me :'D
TaviTurnip's avatar
I'm sorry! D: Agh I hate giving people critique and then having them go readjust or redraw whole parts of the art because it makes me feel so bad xD I'm always so afraid of critiquing and criticizing peoples' art, uguu.

I hope it goes well, at least.
SoulSpade's avatar
Well, I have to if it's gonna look like it should ;w; I welcome the extra effort if it means it looks better, and I'm thankful the critique. ^^ Don't worry about it