Comment on About a boy by ozzla
You're right, the howl and the heart aren't the same - it's just that the heart occurs after the howl 
I'll review that now so thanks for pointing it out, and have a look at the ending too since it relates to that.
Does this confusion make it annoying to read or is it one of the factors that makes it intriguing?
I'll review that now so thanks for pointing it out, and have a look at the ending too since it relates to that.Does this confusion make it annoying to read or is it one of the factors that makes it intriguing?
The confusion isn't quite annoying, but a part of it could be cleared up slightly. Then it would be more intriguing, without anything too mindboggling.